Wednesday, September 12, 2007

Shoonya



you touched the deepest core of my life and moved along...
the sound of your laughter keeps ringing in my ears...
i remember the gentleness with which you used to set foot on this earth
- ensuring that she got the warmth of your very being...
i still feel the intensity of your breath,
- a gift you gave all of us!
i cannot forget the times you cried with me,
- petty worries of a teenager
i loved the way you hugged me...
i'm blessed to even have you with me...
i adored your sight and waited to simply get a glimpse!
i don't know if i will ever love anyone as i love you!!


these are some thoughts dedicated to someone who touched my life!!

18 comments:

Ashu said...

toucy and cool snaps Kirthi. Did ya get my mail on ur office id ?

Wonderful thoughts penned. :)

KAYLEE said...

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chronicwriter said...

awesome... you write very well..
just tagged you ... check my blog...

annie said...

How sweet..

Voracious Blog Reader said...

Hey Kirthi,

Nice one.

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i don't know if i will ever love anyone as i love you!!
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This statement will be repeated when you find a new love.

Voracious Blog Reader

Anonymous said...

@ Voracious Blog Reader: i thought it was important to answer this... :)

the person for whom i have written this poem is my guru... he been the most beautiful experience in my life.. yes i have loved many people... but there is something which is very unique about this relationship which i don't think will ever change..

atleast i have never seen it change for the last 15 years of my life!! -kirthi

Voracious Blog Reader said...

My Apologies Kirthi,

I thought this post was linked to your "Sniff...Sniff" post and was a bit irritated (rather didn't expect a post like this to follow suit) with this post.

Sorry, once again. Never meant to hurt you.

Voracious Blog Reader

Kirthi said...

ha hahah na i wasn't hurt at all... the post was very abstract n i understand... n not until u mentioned dat i even thought that it can be linked up to my older post...

Voracious Blog Reader said...

Hi Kirthi,

Great to note that you weren't hurt.

On the other hand, I was dejected that I hurted someone.

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n not until u mentioned dat i even thought that it can be linked up to my older post
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Oh! Is it? Hee hee.


Voracious Blog Reader

Keshi said...

wow nice one Kirthi! That person sure is very lucky to be loved by ya!

Keshi.

Nags said...

i cant write poetry to save my life, so this is great! really!!

Voracious Blog Reader said...

Hey Kirthi,

Where is your new post?

Voracious Blog Reader

Ashu said...

kaha ho?

Jyoti said...

amazingly beautiful...i loved your poetry here!

Nags said...

nice post :)

and thanks a ton for jumping to help with ppt. i got it fixed, took another perspective from a colleague and its done! :)

i see that you are a trainer too.. where do you work and in what area?

Kiran said...

its always gud to b in that moment! relish and cherish

hello :-)

Prasanna said...

Wonderful poem that you have here!!! It does feel right from the bottom of ur heart.

A.J.Anto said...

Awesome post Kirthi...Assuming this lover of yours is you-know-who :), i am going to add it ishas.blogspot.com..